HOW TO WRITE CLASSIFIED ADS
The
only thing is, hardly anyone gives much real thought to the basic
ingredient of
selling by e-mail (or mail) - the writing of profitable classified ads. If
your e-mail order
business is to
succeed, then you must acquire the expertise of writing classified ads that
sell your
product or services!
So
what makes a classified ad good or bad? First of all, it must appeal to
the reader, and as such, it must say exactly what you want it to say. Secondly,
it has to say what it says in the least possible number of words in order to
keep your operating costs within your budget. And thirdly, it has to produce
the desired results whether inquiries or sales.
Grabbing
the reader's attention is your first objective. You must assume the
reader
is "scanning" the page on which your ad appears in the company of two or three
hundred
classified ads. Therefore, there has to be something about your ad that causes
him to stop
scanning and look at yours! So, the first two or three words of your ad are of
the utmost
importance and deserve your careful consideration. Most surveys show that
words or
phrases that quickly involve the reader, tend to be the best
attention-grabbers. Such
words as: FREE... WIN... MAKE BIG MONEY...
Whatever
words you use as attention-grabbers, to start your ads, you should bear
in mind that they'll be competing with similar attention-grabbers of the other
ads on the
same page. Therefore, in addition to your lead words, your ad must quickly go
on to
promise or state further benefits to the reader. In other words, your ad might
read
something like this: MAKE BIG MONEY! Easy & Simple. We show you how!
In
the language of professional copywriters, you've grabbed the attention of
your
prospect, and interested him with something that even he can do.
The
next rule of good classified copywriting has to do with the arousal of the
reader's desire to get in on your offer. In a great many instances, this rule
is by-passed,
and it appears, this is the real reason that an ad doesn't pull according to
the expectations
of the advertiser.
Think
about it - you've got your reader's attention; you've told him it's easy
and
simple; and you're about to ask him to do something. Unless you take the time
to further
"want your offer," your ad is going to only half turn him on. He'll compare
your ad with
the others that have grabbed his attention and finally decide upon the one that
interests
him the most.
What
I'm saying is that here is the place for you to insert that magic word
"guaranteed" or some other such word or phrase. So now, we've got an ad that
reads:
MAKE BIG MONEY! Easy & Simple. Guaranteed!
Now
the reader is turned on, and in his mind, he can't lose. You're ready to
ask for his money. This is the "demand for action" part of your ad. This is
the part
where you want to use such words as: Limited offer - Act now! Write today!
Only and/or just...
Putting
it all together, then your ad might read something like this: MAKE BIG MONEY!
Easy & Simple. Guaranteed! Limited offer. Send $l to:
These
are the ingredients of any good classified ad - Attention - Interest -
Desire - Action... Without these four ingredients skillfully integrated into
your ad,
chances are your ad will just "lie there" and not do anything but cost you
money. What
we've just shown you is a basic classified ad. Although such an ad could be
placed in any leading publication and would pull a good response, it's known as
a "blind ad" and
would pull inquiries and responses from a whole spectrum of people reading the
publication
in which it appeared. In other words, from as many "time-wasters" as from bona
fide
buyers.
So
let's try to give you an example of the kind of classified ad you might want
to
use, say to sell a report such as this one... Using all the rules of basic
advertising
copywriting, and stating exactly what our product is, our ad reads thusly:
MONEY-MAKER'S SECRETS! How To Write winning classified
ads. Simple & easy to learn -should double or triple your
responses. Rush $1 to BC Sales, 10 Main Anytown, TX 75001.
The point we're making is that:
-
You've got to grab the reader's attention...
-
You've got to "interest him" with something that appeals to him...
-
You've got to
"further stimulate" him with something (catch-phrase) that makes him "desire"
the product
or service...
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Demand that he act immediately
There's
no point in being tricky or clever. Just adhere to the basics and your
profits will increase accordingly. One of the best ways of learning to write
good classified
ads is to study the classifieds - try to figure out exactly what they're
attempting to sell -
and then practice rewriting them according to the rules we've just given you.
Whenever
you sit down to write a classified, always write it all out - write down
everything you want
to say - and then go back over it, crossing out words, and refining your
phraseology.
The
final ingredient of your classified ad is of course, your name, address to
which
the reader is to respond - where he's to send his money or write for further
information.
Generally
speaking, readers respond more often to ads that include a name than
to
those showing just initials or an address only. However, because advertising
costs are
based upon the number of words, or the amount of space your ad uses, the use of
some
names in classified ads could become quite expensive. If we were to ask our ad
respondents to write to or send their money to The Research Writers & Publishers
Association, or to Book Business Mart, or even to Money Maker's Opportunity
Digest,
our advertising costs would be prohibitive. Thus we shorten our name
Researchers or
Money-Makers. The point here is to think relative to the placement costs of
your ad, and
to shorten excessively long names.
The
same holds true when listing your post office box number. Shorten it to
just
plain Box 40, or in the case of a rural delivery, shorten it to just RRl.
The
important thing is to know the rules of profitable classified ad writing,
and to
follow them. Hold your costs in line.
Now
you know the basics... the rest is up to you.
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